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I'm kicking myself for not thinking of this. Great idea combining Plato's famous analogy with the original prompt, and you tie a third thread in nicely at the end with the unexpected purpose of all the people living in the Cave. I think yours is also the first of these quests I've read where the AI comes across as genuinely "good" or well-intentioned, instead of having some ulterior motive.

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Thank you so much! I loved your AI too! It was very 2001. There was even a part where it said "I can't do that" and I read it in HAL's voice.

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I was not expecting that twist! Reminds me a little of Kazuo Ishiguro's Never Let Me Go, though this is more starkly dystopian.

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Thank you! I'm not familiar with Kazuo Ishiguro's work. I'll have to put it on the list.

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Wonderful premise revealed by a great twist - and there's even a happy ending!

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Thank you! It was fun to write. I'm glad y'all like it.

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