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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

I was not expecting that twist! Reminds me a little of Kazuo Ishiguro's Never Let Me Go, though this is more starkly dystopian.

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J. M. Allen's avatar

Thank you! I'm not familiar with Kazuo Ishiguro's work. I'll have to put it on the list.

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Johnathan Reid's avatar

Wonderful premise revealed by a great twist - and there's even a happy ending!

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J. M. Allen's avatar

Thank you! It was fun to write. I'm glad y'all like it.

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J. M. Allen's avatar

Thank you so much! I loved your AI too! It was very 2001. There was even a part where it said "I can't do that" and I read it in HAL's voice.

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